this anatomy is messed up, man. i like that you're going for something a little more stylized, but i think you're pushing to far away from realism. i mean, this hardly looks human in anatomy. if i saw a real person with anatomy like that, i'd be afraid of them. try starting with a more realistic drawing and simplifying from there. those hands hardly look like hands. and the only reason why i identified the foot as a foot is because its the only thing it could've been based on its location. i know you can do better than this. put some time into the next one you do. keep it up, though. draw draw draw!
I must admit it discourages me a little bit, because I was so happy that I drew this. I still think that anatomy looks fine, but I'll have to move on I guess.
don't be discouraged, man. i've put out shit that i was proud of. i mean, look at that older cammy pic i did. i was proud of that and it really sucks. i think you'll understand where i'm coming from a little more when you get more adjusted to digital stuff again. i think you're just either a little rusty or going through a funk at the moment. it'll pass so long as you keep working at it.
design wise, this is your best so far. but the anatomy is WAY off. shit is twisting in ways it really shouldn't. she does not look like she's comfortable and she really looks like someone broke her fingers. hands are a bitch, but just keep working on them and they'll start to look better.
i'm sure whatever you do do next will be better than this. just spend some more time on it and really focus on the anatomy looking right and having some depth.
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I must admit it discourages me a little bit, because I was so happy that I drew this. I still think that anatomy looks fine, but I'll have to move on I guess.
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[link] <--- so true!
design wise, this is your best so far. but the anatomy is WAY off. shit is twisting in ways it really shouldn't. she does not look like she's comfortable and she really looks like someone broke her fingers. hands are a bitch, but just keep working on them and they'll start to look better.
i'm sure whatever you do do next will be better than this. just spend some more time on it and really focus on the anatomy looking right and having some depth.
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